U gave the track that bit more for me to give it a 10/10. As I said in my review of the original track, the original is great but the bassline could be a bit more powerful. U ''solved'' the bassline with your remix. 15thdimension and Qwamii, both of you a really good job.
Sounds really professional. I haven't any tips yet, except of this one:
Finish this MONSTER tune!
I love the ''psytrance'' feeling in this track, especially the kick and the bassline. The transitions are good combined with the sound effects. A few tips:
I had the feeling at 1:53 a new whole track started. You did a good job with the transition at 1:48-1:52, but in my opinion that transition is not enough to introduce your main-melody part.
The sounds quality after 1:53 could be better.
Overall it is a good track with a lot of good elements in it.
Good uplifting feeling with high quality sounds. Love the breakdown at 0:55-1:35.
In my opinion the bassline (started at 3:25) is a bit to soft and to high and could be an octave lower. In total it is a really good track. I love it. Keep up the good work and Merry Christmas.
thank you very much :)
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